15
Colleges
1
Q&A
8
AP/IBs
19
Essays
5
Awards
10
Activities
Jack of All Trades, Master of None
I started with a very aggressive college application, and was able to get into a couple of good schools, and I'm now attending of my dream schools.
Jack of All Trades, Master of None
15
Colleges
1
Q&A
8
AP/IBs
19
Essays
5
Awards
10
Activities
Race
Asian
Gender
Male
School Type
Public
Legacy
No
Low income
No
First generation
No
International
No
Recruited Athlete
No
GPA (W)
4
GPA (UW)
4
GPA Scale
4
SAT
1570
# AP/IB Exams
8
Personal Statement
The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?
A cool, windless day with temperatures in the 50’s, the sun hidden behind clouds. Golden-amber leaves concealing the trail’s black speckled pavement with rays of light penetrating a rooftop of overhea
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University of Wisconsin-Madison
Campus Statement
At its core, University of Wisconsin-Madison is an “Everything School”. Nearly every other college forces students to make sacrifices. Academic rigor or athletics? Diverse population over a beautiful
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Purdue University (West Lafayette)
Why Purdue?
To me, meaningful academic and personal development would define a successful college career, and I believe Purdue allows for both interests to be fulfilled. With a Top-20 computer science program, I’
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Why Major?
As a child, I was always in trouble for doodling. Inspired by animated movies I saw in theaters, I’d draw superheroes, knights, and monsters throughout my assignments, and even if they weren’t the mos
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Briefly discuss your reasons for pursuing the second choice major you have selected. (Respond in 100 words or fewer.)
At its core, I need my career to make a difference. This is far from unique, with everyone having their own definition of making a difference. To me, however, making a difference means developing some
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Illinois Wesleyan University
Please write your Personal Statement here.
To me, IWU represents home. As someone who was raised in Bloomington Normal, I've developed a love for this area. Additionally, I've grown up with plenty of experiences at Wesleyan, taking piano and c
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Washington University in St. Louis
Danforth Short Answer
My high school’s orchestra is seniority-based, with experienced members taking leadership roles. However, I had to fill that role prematurely junior year. During COVID, many of the seniors who led the
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Danforth Essay
I always thought Grandparents’ Day at my elementary school was stupid. On Grandparents’ Day, I had to watch everyone’s grandparents file into the classroom for arts and crafts, but because my grandpar
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What you are interested in studying and why
Art has always been my gateway to express my most vivid imaginations. As a child, I ruled over majestic castles teeming with brave knights and faced off against galactic supervillians in my own multiv
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Rice University
The Admission Committee is interested in getting to know each student as well as possible through the application process. Please respond to each of the following prompts. Please explain why you wish to study in the academic areas you selected above.
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Based upon your exploration of Rice University, what elements of the Rice experience appeal to you?
Leaving home for the first time is scary, but after exploring Rice, I know I’ll be at home with Rice’s Residential Colleges. Instead of having to seek community from Greek-life, I’d automatically be i
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Rice is lauded for creating a collaborative atmosphere that enhances the quality of life for all members of our campus community. The Residential College System and undergraduate life are heavily influenced by the unique life experiences and cultural tradition each student brings. What life perspectives would you contribute to the Rice community?
I always thought Grandparents’ Day at my elementary school was stupid. On Grandparents’ Day, grandparents are invited to spend the day at school with their grandkids, enjoying a day of family fun. How
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By typing my name in the space provided, I certify that I will, if admitted, abide by and support the Honor System at Rice University. Joseph Shim
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Brown University
Brown’s Open Curriculum allows students to explore broadly while also diving deeply into their academic pursuits. Tell us about any academic interests that excite you, and how you might use the Open Curriculum to pursue them while also embracing topics with which you are unfamiliar. (200-250 words)
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Brown’s culture fosters a community in which students challenge the ideas of others and have their ideas challenged in return, promoting a deeper and clearer understanding of the complex issues confronting society. This active engagement in dialogue is as present outside the classroom as it is in academic spaces. Tell us about a time you were challenged by a perspective that differed from your own. How did you respond? (200-250 words)
2020 was a divisive year with COVID-19, Civil Rights protests and the presidential election, and this was reflected in the conversations I had in my own social circles. Initially, I couldn’t unders
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Brown students care deeply about their work and the world around them. Students find contentment, satisfaction, and meaning in daily interactions and major discoveries. Whether big or small, mundane or spectacular, tell us about something that brings you joy. (200-250 words)
As Midwestern as it sounds, something that brings me joy is a barn. Not just any barn. This is THE Barn, my friend’s barn equipped with refrigerators, a ping-pong table, and a Wii console. In short, a
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Carnegie Mellon University
Most students choose their intended major or area of study based on a passion or inspiration that’s developed over time – what passion or inspiration led you to choose this area of study? (300 word maximum)
Art has always been my gateway to express my most vivid imaginations. As a child, I ruled over majestic castles teeming with brave knights and faced off against galactic supervillians in my own multiv
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Many students pursue college for a specific degree, career opportunity or personal goal. Whichever it may be, learning will be critical to achieve your ultimate goal. As you think ahead to the process of learning during your college years, how will you define a successful college experience? (300 word maximum)
It’s no secret that Carnegie Mellon University is an impressive college that allows for career growth, but my campus visit and exposure to CMU’s student life made me confident that I’d experience pers
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Consider your application as a whole. What do you personally want to emphasize about your application for the admission committee’s consideration? Highlight something that’s important to you or something you haven’t had a chance to share. Tell us, don’t show us (no websites please). (300 word maximum)
I always thought Grandparents’ Day at my elementary school was stupid. On Grandparents’ Day, grandparents are invited to spend the day at school with their grandkids, enjoying a day of family fun. How
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