21
Colleges
2
Q&As
10
AP/IBs
59
Essays
5
Awards
10
Activities
Accepted early as a Regents' Candidate to UC Berkeley Haas (<1% acceptance rate) | Essay Editing
When I originally approached college applications, I focused on starting as early as I could and being as efficient with my time as possible. I tackled essays that I knew l'd have the most difficulty with early on as it allowed me to focus my energy on those and build essay writing skills from the beginning. I also made sure to identify essays that were the same across multiple schools and spend the most time on those so that I could use that as a blueprint and ensure that it was high-quality as I would be reusing it for several universities.
Accepted early as a Regents' Candidate to UC Berkeley Haas (<1% acceptance rate) | Essay Editing
21
Colleges
2
Q&As
10
AP/IBs
59
Essays
5
Awards
10
Activities
Race
Asian
Gender
Male
School Type
Public
Legacy
No
Low income
No
First generation
No
International
No
Recruited Athlete
No
GPA (W)
4.67
GPA (UW)
3.98
GPA Scale
4
ACT
35
# AP/IB Exams
10
Personal Statement
Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.
I gripped the sides of my bathroom counter, staring at the grotesque figure that stood hunched in the mirror. Tears welled up as I realized that no amount of ice-cold water splashed on my face would a
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University of California Essay
Describe an example of your leadership experience in which you have positively influenced others, helped resolve disputes, or contributed to group efforts over time.
Growing up, much of my education was received at the dinner table. I wasn't homeschooled, but my wide eyes looked back and forth as my parents and teenage siblings discussed topics ranging from SAT sc
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Every person has a creative side, and it can be expressed in many ways: problem solving, original and innovative thinking, and artistically, to name a few. Describe how you express your creative side.
In sixth grade, my sweet tooth became a fiend: insatiable. My clothes grew tighter; my swimming rash guard clung to its few threads of dignity. High school and puberty hit - so did reality. I waged a
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What would you say is your greatest talent or skill? How have you developed and demonstrated that talent over time?
As a child, shutting up wasn't exactly my forte. A hyperactive kid, I never stopped moving, running around the house and running my mouth - I could literally talk your ears off if I tried! As I approa
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Describe the most significant challenge you have faced and the steps you have taken to overcome this challenge. How has this challenge affected your academic achievement?
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University of Washington (Seattle)
UW personal statement
I gripped the sides of my bathroom counter, staring at the grotesque figure that stood hunched in the mirror. Tears welled up as I realized that no amount of ice-cold water splashed on my face would a
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UW short response
I am the product of globalization, the marriage of a million distinct cultures. Growing up in Orange County, one of the most racially-diverse regions in the world, I was born in a hospital filled with
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University of Wisconsin-Madison
Campus Statement
Growing up, much of my education was received at the dinner table; I wasn’t homeschooled, but my wide 6-year old eyes looked back and forth as my parents and teenage siblings discussed a myriad of top
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University of Southern California
Academic Interest
I became enthralled with how interactions between nations fueled public policy as I debated topics ranging from the Chinese Belt and Road Initiative to Nigerian lithium exportation. However, along thi
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Describe yourself in three words.
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If your life had a theme song, what would it be? Run the World (Girls). Growing up inspired by the women in my life, I
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Dream trip: Spain with my best friend, inspired by my childhood favorite movie, Zindagi Na Milegi Dobara. What TV show will you binge watch next? Made in Heaven: lessons on how to balance Indian heritage and a
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Which well-known person or fictional character would be your ideal roommate? Auguste Escoffier. He’d teach me to preserve traditional tastes whilst
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Favorite book: Animal Farm. Required novel? Yes, but I’m forever floored by the end,
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What is your favorite snack?
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Best movie of all time:
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Dream job:
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If your life had a theme song, what would it be?
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Dream trip:
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What TV show will you binge watch next?
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Which well-known person or fictional character would be your ideal roommate?
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Favorite book:
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If you could teach a class on any topic, what would it be?
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University of Virginia
What about your individual background, perspective, or experience will serve as a source of strength for you or those around you at UVA? Feel free to write about any past experience or part of your background that has shaped your perspective and will be a source of strength, including but not limited to those related to your community, upbringing, educational environment, race, gender, or other aspects of your background that are important to you.
I am the product of globalization, the marriage of a million distinct cultures. Growing up in Orange County, one of the most racially-diverse regions in the world, I was born in a hospital filled with
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Boston College
Boston College’s founding in 1863 was in response to society’s call. That call came from an immigrant community in Boston seeking a Jesuit education to foster social mobility. Still today, the University empowers its students to use their education to address society’s greatest needs. Which of today’s local or global issues is of particular concern to you and how might you use your Boston College education to address it?
Semiconductors: materials with electrical conductivity values between that of a conductor and an insulator. The backbone of all technological development in the world. The United States remains locked
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University of Pennsylvania
Gratitude Question
Dear [Name Redacted], The hardest question I could ever be asked is what my favorite memory with you is. Our relationship may have begun with me as a toddler and you as my babysitter, but even no
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Community Question Common Application
I am the product of globalization, the marriage of a million distinct cultures. Growing up in Orange County, one of the most racially-diverse regions in the world, I was introduced to the aromas of sa
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Wharton Essay
There’s more to business than just business. The United States remains locked in a trade war with China, highlighting the issue of American dependence on foreign resources. Should the relationshi
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Northwestern University
Personal experiences short essay
I am the product of globalization, the marriage of a million distinct cultures. Growing up in Orange County, one of the most racially-diverse regions in the world, I was introduced to the aromas of sa
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Painting “The Rock” is a tradition at Northwestern that invites all forms of expression—students promote campus events or extracurricular groups, support social or activist causes, show their Wildcat spirit (what we call “Purple Pride”), celebrate their culture, and more. What would you paint on The Rock, and why?
"The Battle of Waterloo!" "King James!" "Sodium! That one was easy." Along with a myriad of other guesses, this cacophony of sounds fills the family room on weekday evenings. Since we first saw
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Northwestern fosters a distinctively interdisciplinary culture. We believe discovery and innovation thrive at the intersection of diverse ideas, perspectives, and academic interests. Within this setting, if you could dream up an undergraduate class, research project, or creative effort (a start-up, a design prototype, a performance, etc.), what would it be? Who might be some ideal classmates or collaborators?
Skin Care Is Unisex: An Analysis of Modern-Day Masculinity and Gender Roles Although the boundaries of masculinity have been pushed during the 21st century, the majority of men remain stuck to the i
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Brown University
Brown's Open Curriculum allows students to explore broadly while also diving deeply into their academic pursuits. Tell us about any academic interests that excite you, and how you might pursue them at Brown. (200-250 words)
I became enthralled with how interactions between nations fueled public policy as I debated topics ranging from the Chinese Belt and Road Initiative to Nigerian lithium exportation. Along this journey
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Students entering Brown often find that making their home on College Hill naturally invites reflection on where they came from. Share how an aspect of your growing up has inspired or challenged you, and what unique contributions this might allow you to make to the Brown community.
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Brown students care deeply about their work and the world around them. Students find contentment, satisfaction, and meaning in daily interactions and major discoveries. Whether big or small, mundane or spectacular, tell us about something that brings you joy. (200-250 words)
“The Battle of Waterloo!” “King James the Third!” “Sodium! That one was easy.” Along with a myriad of other guesses – wrong, for the most part – this cacophony of sounds is what fills the family
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Most meaningful extracurricular commitment
Joining the debate team in middle school transformed me from a kid who cowered in fear into a confident, well-spoken young adult. When I entered high school, though, I became cognizant of the number o
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If you could teach a class on any one thing, whether academic or otherwise, what would it be?
Skin Care Is Unisex. Although the boundaries of masculinity have been pushed slightly during the 21st century, the majority of men remain stuck to the idea that taking care of yourself is inherently
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Why Brown?
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Boston University
Reflect on a social or community issue that deeply resonates with you. Why is it important to you, and how have you been involved in addressing or raising awareness about it?
My political participation commenced with what nearly every teenager does: repost an Instagram graphic or two or twenty in an effort to make a “difference.” Yet as headlines continued to bear of bad n
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Harvard University
Life experiences / contribute to Harvard
I am the product of globalization, the marriage of a million distinct cultures. Growing up in Orange County, one of the most racially-diverse regions in the world, I was introduced to the aromas of sa
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Intellectual experience
“All animals are equal, but some animals are more equal than others.” Reading this quote for the first time in eighth grade, I knew I had found my favorite book. Animal Farm was required reading,
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EC/employment/travel/family experiences
As a child, shutting up wasn’t exactly my forte. I could literally talk your ears off if I tried! Beginning high school in a new district, though, I was thrust into a novel environment where I quick
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Education plans
Pursuing a double concentration in social studies and economics at Harvard will allow me to explore the intersection of political science and private innovation, learning to utilize both public policy
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Roommate intro
Dear my future karaoke partner, ¿Qué tal? Ever since I watched Zindagi Na Milegi Dobara (my favorite Bollywood movie to date) as a child, I’ve been obsessed with visiting Spain. Hence, I’m forever
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Columbia University
List a selection of texts, resources and outlets that have contributed to your intellectual development outside of academic courses, including but not limited to books, journals, websites, podcasts, essays, plays, presentations, videos, museums and other content that you enjoy. Writing/Websites: 23 Things They Don’t Tell You About Capitalism; Presidential or Parliamentary
Democracy, Juan Linz; The Master’s Tools Will Never Dismantle the Master’s House; Brookings Institution; Center for Global Development; Shoe Dog: A Memoir by the Creator of Nike; The Psychology of Mon
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A hallmark of the Columbia experience is being able to learn and thrive in an equitable and inclusive community with a wide range of perspectives. Tell us about an aspect of your own perspective, viewpoint or lived experience that is important to you, and describe how it has shaped the way you would learn from and contribute to Columbia’s diverse and collaborative community.
I am the product of globalization, the marriage of a million cultures. Growing up in Orange County, one of the most racially-diverse regions globally, I was introduced to the aromas of saag paneer an
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In college, students are often challenged in ways that they could not predict or anticipate. It is important to us, therefore, to understand an applicant's ability to navigate through adversity. Please describe a barrier or obstacle you have faced and discuss the personal qualities, skills or insights you have developed as a result. Common Application
My sweet tooth was a fiend: insatiable. The rashguard I wore while swimming clung to its few remaining threads of dignity. But I was hit with the reality of scrutinizing comments accompanying every
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Why are you interested in attending Columbia University? We encourage you to consider the aspect(s) that you find unique and compelling about Columbia.
Wandering Morningside Heights’ maze of streets, admiring the intricacies of Columbia’s libraries, I felt almost overwhelmed. Dozens of ethnic communities surrounding campus and books like Professor Ma
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What attracts you to your preferred areas of study at Columbia College?
Debate rounds ranging from the South China Sea to Nigerian lithium exportation meant I spent my adolescence embroiled in political statements from Southeast Asian countries and articles from the Guard
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Yale University
What academic areas fit your interests or goals most comfortably? Global Affairs Other Academic Interests? Ethics, Politics and Economics Other Academic Interests? Political Science A topic or idea that excites you related to your academic interests?
One tournament, debating about South Korea’s supply of semiconductors to China, my curiosity shot up as I read article after article about China’s expanding influence across the globe, particularly in
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Why Yale
It was while singing my heart out to Bruno Mars in the JE common room, my mind racing after intense discussions with my YYGS family regarding the intersection of philosophy and government, that I firs
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What inspires you?
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Reflect on an element of your personal experience that you feel will enrich your college. How has it shaped you?
I despise asparagus…well, not always. As a child, in fact, I had an unhealthy – or rather, quite healthy – obsession with it. When I was a toddler, though, my sister informed me that, at seven, my tas
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You are teaching a new Yale course. What is it called?
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Other than a family member, who is someone who has had a significant influence on you? What has been the impact of their influence?
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What is something about you that is not included anywhere else in your application?
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New York University
We are looking for peacemakers, changemakers, global citizens, boundary breakers, creatives and innovators - Choose one quote from the following and let us know why it inspires you; or share a short quote and person not on our list who inspires you, and include why. "You have the right to want things and to want things to change." Sanna Marin, Former Prime Minister of Finland, 2023 NYU Commencement Address
My affinity for public speaking steered me onto the debate team, where I dove deep into topics like the South China Sea and Nigerian lithium exportation. I became enthralled by relations between sover
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Inspirations Essay Text
My affinity for public speaking steered me onto the debate team, where I dove deep into topics like the South China Sea and Nigerian lithium exportation. I became enthralled by relations between sov
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University of Michigan
Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it.
I am the product of globalization, the marriage of a million distinct cultures. Growing up in Orange County, one of the most racially-diverse regions in the world, I was born in a hospital filled with
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Describe the unique qualities that attract you to the specific undergraduate College or School (including preferred admission and dual degree programs) to which you are applying at the University of Michigan. How would that curriculum support your interests?
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Do you have any additional info to share?
Academic Information: I am currently dual enrolled and will be taking Fundamentals of Business in the spring at a local community college. This class does not appear on my high school transcript, but
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Who should read over your essays?
It's incredibly important to have various perspectives on your essay, but not too many. I suggest having one or two family members or very close friends read your essays as well as one or two people w
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How did you manage the stress of the application season?
Start as early as you cant I found that starting at the beginning of the summer before my senior year allowed me to get a headstart on my Common Application Personal Statement as well as my UC PIQs. g
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