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AP/IBs

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Awards

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Elaine

MIT '26Verified acceptance to Massachusetts Institute of Technology

Electrical Engineering and CS student interested in Management, Public Policy, and Political Science

Going into the application process, seeing other people's essays (whether it be through Reddit or Youtube), really helped me better understand what college essays were all about. So I hope people can better understand the process through reading mine too! I originally planned on applying to 12 schools, but once I got into MIT early I withdrew two applications. These are some of the essays I wrote for schools that I got into; enjoy! And if you want more advice after unlocking my page feel free to shoot me an email (exliu@mit.edu) :) Also, please remember. Convey yourself in a way that's easily understood yet still slightly nuanced. And most importantly, write what's authentic to you, deadass. Don't fake your personality, or worse, plagiarize, or it won't truly be you getting into these schools (and you should know better). Good luck!

Acceptances

Massachusetts Institute of TechnologyVerified acceptance to Massachusetts Institute of Technology
Harvard UniversityVerified acceptance to Harvard University
Columbia University in the City of New YorkVerified acceptance to Columbia University in the City of New York
University of PennsylvaniaVerified acceptance to University of Pennsylvania
Duke University
University of Southern California
University of North Carolina at Chapel HillVerified acceptance to University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill
Georgia Institute of TechnologyVerified acceptance to Georgia Institute of Technology

Rejections

Stanford University
Yale University

Withdrawn

University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign
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Elaine

MIT '26Verified acceptance to Massachusetts Institute of Technology

Electrical Engineering and CS student interested in Management, Public Policy, and Political Science

11

Colleges

3

Q&As

12

AP/IBs

14

Essays

5

Awards

10

Activities

Acceptances

Massachusetts Institute of TechnologyVerified acceptance to Massachusetts Institute of Technology
Harvard UniversityVerified acceptance to Harvard University
Columbia University in the City of New YorkVerified acceptance to Columbia University in the City of New York
University of PennsylvaniaVerified acceptance to University of Pennsylvania
Duke University
University of Southern California
University of North Carolina at Chapel HillVerified acceptance to University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill
Georgia Institute of TechnologyVerified acceptance to Georgia Institute of Technology

Rejections

Stanford University
Yale University

Withdrawn

University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign

Background

Race

Asian

Gender

Female

School Type

Private

Legacy

No

Low income

No

First generation

No

International

No

Recruited Athlete

No

Academics

GPA (W)

4.75

GPA Scale

4

SAT

1580

# AP/IB Exams

12

14 Essays

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essay

Personal Statement

3
essays

College logoMIT

1
essay

College logoHarvard

3
essays

College logoColumbia

1
essay

College logoUPenn

2
essays

College logoDuke

1
essay

College logoUSC

2
essays

College logoUNC Chapel Hill

12 AP / IB Scores

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5 Awards

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10 Activities

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3 Q&As

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